Score: 3

"Not very good"

submission: Ghost Busters lvl 1 test

date: December 19, 2009

Sometimes when you jump you barely move and sometimes you fly up. Also if you jump and shoot you need to shoot again to be able to move. The character moved a bit too slowly for a platformer and sometimes you fall through the platforms. The thing you shoot kills the enemies even if it goes over or under them.

Score: 8

"Good"

submission: The Metropolis

date: June 21, 2009

The drawing and animation were very good but it didn't make much sense. The trees growing looked rushed because the trees just expanded. Reminds me of the film Dark City. 8/10.

Score: 7

"wow"

submission: My First Ever Flash

date: February 17, 2009

Very good for a first flash, not much is wrong with it but the play button should have stopped to make it easier to click and the screenshot on the computer looked out of place with the drawing style you used. Also the door didn't quite look right when it opened.

Score: 4

"Meh"

submission: Zombie Teachers Attack

date: December 27, 2008

The zombie picture was very well drawn but wasn't animated so it was less than it could have been. The crossharirs were just crosshairs, there were no characters, no storyline and no upgrades or points or anything, which doesn't really suit a fps in my opinion.
The shooting a teacher idea is funny but it's no good without a plot.

Score: 5

"Quite funny"

submission: Windows RL - Untitled

date: December 27, 2008

The animation and graphics were poor, try not to use black backgrounds because they blend in with the newgrounds background and contrast too much with bright colours. Also, don't use gradients where they're not needed because it instantly makes any flash look like it was made by a 10 year old.It could have done with sound and some more colour.
Some of the jokes seemed a bit half arsed, as did the typos on everything eg 'splinternet explorer' and everything falling apart. Being interactive would have made it more interesting.
A few of the gags were funny, eg the stabbing the pong ball, but everything was sloppy. If you practised you could probably make something good.

Score: 7

"good"

submission: Collect teh cookies!

date: May 25, 2008

The game was pretty good but the enemies walk through walls in some levels. The characters could all have done with some animation and the game would be a lot better with a way to score points, but it's really good for a first platformer. 7*

Score: 7

"good"

submission: PAML 1

date: December 8, 2007

Pretty good but the sound wasn't very clear and it was a bit short.

Score: 5

"lol"

submission: Wow I can get sexual too

date: October 12, 2007

I thought it would just be more crap but that was quite funny. i had no idea my speakers could make noises that high pitched.

Score: 6

"Needs a bit of work..."

submission: Un-named Skate Video

date: August 3, 2007

Your board motion was really choppy and you should work on that but your skaters moved like skaters not like they normally do in skate flashes.

Score: 9

"lol"

submission: Windows XP: Home Edition

date: July 19, 2007

Not enough memory to move shark.